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PostSubject: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 9:22 am

Setting/Plot: First we start out in a green forest in the afternoon, but we get knocked out and we awake in a underground cave. It is now midnight and there is a monster in the underground cave. The beast brought us down there to be devoured for dinner or saved for later, the problem is...how will we get out? We don't know how we got it...we need to escape the monster's lair but will we get out alive? Some may die, some may live and others get left behind...Would you be one of the few that makes it out alive? Well we will just have to find out...

The monster:



The Unterbrecher

They say that he once was a human, his heart was set for a fair maiden but there was another which also loved her. Her heart was set for the one which soon became the Unterbrecher but the other man was jealous. He was blinded by his anger, jealousy and greed that he tricked and trapped the other man. Turning him ugly, turning him into a complete monster which the fair maiden just couldn't love...that same man which casted the spell ended up with the maiden as his wife but the now monster remained unloved and soon feasted on human flesh. Ashamed of its appearence it remained in the forest and ate any wanderers or anyone who pasted for food.


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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 9:40 am

Michi/Athena/Derrick: A glistening light or star soared through the pink and golden afternoon sunsetting sky. But it wasn't the evening star, it wasn't Venus...
It was a shiny winter dragon which was soaring over the lands with it's two riders on its back.

"There..." Michi pointed out to the forest, "We can land there and rest for the night". The girl or the pretend boy was had more experience even though she was the younger one.

Athena nodded and slowly flapped her wings to make a nice neat landing on the earth. The girl's metallic blue eyes scanned the area before getting off the dragon's back, "Don't go running off!" shouted Derrick her brother with a growl before scanning the are himself with his sliver eyes. The forest was so misty and spooky place, "I don't like this place..." he muttered.

"Creeped out?" Athena chuckled before tasting the air for any nearby creatures.

"Shutup..." he roared back as he continued to stand still in the forest which gave him the spooks.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:02 am

(Using Crystal and Cricket, the Double 'C' XD) :
Eye slit under the thick coat of fog, "Just because I bailed out with you, doesn't mean I'm hanging around you and your.. Your.. Dragon!" Spat as voice, the figure slouching forwards as he stared forwards. A large sword swung around his back as he straightened his neck, twisting his neck around as the boy glanced around the surrounding area. "Crystal?" He asked into the fog. A dark, purple figure merged softly from the dark grayness.
Purple hair sprung forwards, "I got you over those walls, did I not.. Cricket." Crystal asked sternly. Giving Cricket an Icy glare as Cricket chuckled.
Cricket flicked some brown hair out of his eyes, giving a low growl as the sound of beating wings flooded the area. All the fog from a large circle containing Crystal and Cricket disappeared. Causing a bright purple dragon to float onto the ground near Crystal, straightening it's head as it purred loyally around it's master. Crystal chuckled, behind him, two purple, angel like wings merged from the back. They both spread out wide as Crystal grinned sheepishly, Cricket gave a small chuckle. Asoleado threw his head up into the sky and roared loudly.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:19 am

"Hear that?" Mishi asked the others while turning her head to look over her shoulder at the other two.
"Sounds like a dragon..." Derrick commented.
"Looks like a bright light..." Athena said and took a few steps towards the bright light, "If there is life on this forest we might as well check it out..." Athena said before grabbing Michi and placing her onto her back and ran off, completly forgetting Derrick. The dragon ran towards the bright light which was easily seen for it broke out among the mist.

"Wait! you two!" Derrick growled and began running after them, his eyes slitted in anger for them leaving without even thinking about him.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:26 am

Asoleado's ears perked to the noise of humans and dragons moving. Giving a quick growl as he twisted his neck around, Crystal blinked at Asoleado, the light from the sun dragon was probably causing too much attention. Giving a quick snap of his teeth, Crystal backflipped, grasping Cricket by the shoulders as he began to beat his angel wings together. Cricket squirmed as him and Crystal flew into the air, "Stay quiet." Mumbled Crystal, swinging his wings over Cricket and himself. A small light burst, until two black crows remained. "Cra! Cr! Cra!" Crystal squeaked, flapping his black wings together while landing upon a small branch near the commotion. Cricket had a strange time trying to make his black feather wings work, quickly slamming his black body into the branch.
"Craa.." Crystal the Crow sighed, he had transformed both of them into Crows. Asoleado was still upon the ground, for bait.. Hopefully.
Cricket gave a icy look with his yellow bird eyes, quickly gaining balance as his talons dug into the wood.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:10 am

"Oh look... its just another dragon..." Athena said then turned her head back to see Derrick. He breathed heavilly as his body dript with sweat, "Look Derrick, it is your...ghost" she laughed. Michi soon slid off the crystalline winter dragon and scanned the area, her eyes catching the black crows that seemed to know that they were there and were maybe watching them. "I agree with Derrick..." she said in her fake masculine voice, "I don't like this place..."

"Speaking of which do you know there is a story about this forest... and what happens to anyone who enters it...?" Athena asked the two, enjoying there fear.

"No.." Derrick replied as his sliver eyes glanced around.

"The legend says that this place was once a village... a man in the village had a liking for a maiden and the maiden for him, but another man liked this maiden and would fight or kill to get her. He trapped the man which the maideen loved and casted a spell on him, making him a hideous monster...one that the maideen couldn't love. The one who casted the spell and the maideen became a couple... his heart broke. So he destroyed that village and ate everyone in it. They say that this creature still lives today and devours anything that passes through this forest..." the dragon said and smiled to herself when seeing Michi and Derrick was silent. They probally were both scared now...

"But it is only a legend...right?" Michi asked frozen still now.

"You know what they say about legends...it may be true it might not..." Athena replied in her wise, mysterious and cold tone.

"There is the village ruins!" Derrick said pointing at the ruins of buildings, ash and wood. Athena's head and Michi turned in that direction seeing the ruins of what used to be a village, now Athena believed it. Her eyes scanned the area cautiously, they soon catched two black birds which she believed were not just crows.

A loud screech was soon heard in the background, a blood curling screech...the one made by the monster.

((Geesh... now I am not going to sleep tonight... >.<))
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:53 am

"Cra!" Squawked Cricket, slitting his yellow bird eyes while widening his wings to their total length. "Cra!"
Crystal gave a small sigh mixed with a squawk, slapping the other Crow with his right wings. Causing Cricket to sent an intense glare at him, Asoleado growled back to the noise. His wings flashing upwards as they spread out, hoping to scare the monster away, "GAAARRROOOOO!" He roared at the top of the dragon's lungs, causing them to increase in size. Cricket, still in Crow form, not felt pathetic. "Cara? Car?" He asked slouching his feather head forwards. ~Can't we just attack them?~
"Cra.. Cra-Cra-Craaaa.." Crystal replied smoothly, lowering its head and grinning through it's black long beak. "CRA!" Crystal lifted up his black wings, Cricket flew beneath them, wrenching his mouth open while squawking intensely at the humans. Cricket, still in form mode, quickly swooped at the humans, itching it's talons forwards, hoping to swipe atleast the tip of one of the humans head. He quickly swung himself around, beating his wings together rapidly while squawking; "CRAA-CRAA!"
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:05 pm

"Garh!" shouted Derrick as it scratched his head but also ruined his do. "Darn lowsy bird! I knew this place was haunted!" the boy shouted as he took out his sword from it seth and started swinging it at the Cricket Crow. Michi gave a sigh, how she sometimes wished he would be less embarrasing, her eyes soon looked around as she heard an enormus thudd coming closer. "Stop! Leave the crow be! something is coming..." Athena hissed to Derrick and he flicked the grow in the beak before scanning the area once more.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:11 pm

Cricket slit his bird eyes, squawking wildly as the sharp sword was swung towards him constantly. Crystal crow gave a sigh of discouragement as he slouched his bird head forwards, his ears perking slightly as he heard big boom behind him. Twisting his neck around in concern of the noise, spotting a large black object. Giving a quick yelp, a large vine was whipped forwards, knocking the Crow's head and causing the Crystal Crow to tumble to the ground.
Unconscious.
Cricket gave a quick yelp, watching as the other Crow tumbled to the ground. Yelping as the black object darted forwards, yet, also getting hit by the vine. Laying beside the other Crow while Asoleado growled. The vines appeared again, whipping forwards and wrapping around Asoleado. Giving roars in pain as it was pulled towards the figure. Two more vines whipped outwards and got Crystal Crow and Cricket Crow, all three being pulled in until they couldn't be seen or heard..
The monster's eyes opened open, slamming it's feet against the ground in rage.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:31 pm

"That was fast..." Derrick said as the other two froze, "Its the same monster! The UtreHetre(or whatever it is called)" Athena warned and the boy soon stood still not wanting to get involved with it. Unlike his sister...

"We have to help!" Michi said and sped off after the monster and the three. "It is just a dragon and two crows! Why should we worry?!" Derrick asked trying to stop her, "we should go after her..." he said and ran off. Athena sighed and rolled her eyes, "its not like I have a choice..."

"Hu-" Michi last said before getting grabbed in an instant, vines wrapping around her, encasing her body before getting knocked out and being joined with the three. Derrick heard her and snarled, cautiously he walked as his eyes scanned the area everywhere. The sword in his hands...
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:49 pm

(It's the Unterbrecher, know your German Woman. XD)
The creatures piercing eyes glanced around the surrounding area, giving snarls as the girl was also brought with him and the crows. His taloned feet slammed against the ground, easily cutting the earths crust beneath him. Giving a quick howl, another vine whipped out, grasping hold of the sharp sword and bringing it into custody. The Unterbrecher wrenched it's mouth open and roared loudly, suddenly another whip lashing out and whipping Derrick's shoulder. The place were if hit in a certain place.. They would fall Unconscious. The monster, not caring it the boy fell unconscious of not, the vine wrapped around him. Also bringing him into the Unterbrecher's custody. Last.. The winter dragon.
That could be tough, the monster's ten vines lashed out, grabbing the stomach, legs, throat and other parts of the body which could restrain it. As this happened, the monster quickly reeled the dragon in. It's eyes glanced around, all it's vines waving in the air as they all had something in custody. The monster let out an intimidating roar. Before quickly lashing onto all fours, and dashing towards it cave with a strong amount of energy.
(Sorry for slightly PP I'n just trying to get the story started. XD)
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 3:43 am

(( I really don't mind ^.^, but boy that is a really strong monster to carry two dragons with more passengers! XD Next thing you know he'll be carrying the Sydney harbour bridge on his shoulders. By the way I am not learning German I am learning Francais!))

"What the-" the 19 year old said before suddenly and unexpectendly(sp?) his world fell to black and he fell easily into the monster's grip. "Derrick you bum! where have you gone?!", Athena growled before the same looking vines grabbed and restrained her body, the cody freezing touch of her scales froze herself in his grip, "Darn!" she cursed loudly as she was also brought into his custody. Her dark blue eyes gazed around looking for a way to escape but there was none... Several things froze as she furiously breathed at anything she saw before getting bumped in the head several times by the rocks while the Unterbrecher ran into it's cave. She soon fell into the darkness just like the most of them did, it was unlucky that she did for they would have the better advantage of escaping if someone knew the path to get out.

The Unterbrecher opened its mouth and let out a terrible roar and screech as it ran through it's cave. Many bats scattered at it's presence and flying out of the cave, most trying to take a bit out of the beast's captives before flying away in fear and obidence. As the creature ran further and deeper in the cave, things just got darker...and darker.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 6:28 am

(I'm learning German and Spanish. (: Like this means; 'Hello, Nice to meet you Cold. I'm Shunned' in German;
Hallo nett, Sie zu treffen kalt. Ich Werde Gemieden.)

The Unterbrecher continued it's travel downwards into the cave, pitch black covered the walls as it's talons had no trouble gripping onto the floor. It's piercing eyes glared around, there were five entrances. It's heavy breathing echoed through, quickly choosing the second last right tunnel. Running through as all the creatures in it's custody were fainted and not moving. The creature snorted, lowering it's vines once deep into that tunnel, through going into the tunnel, it had also enter three more tunnels. It lowered it's vines letting the humans and dragons upon the ground. The creature snorted, quickly darting away from the few. Thinking of what to cook them with as saliva dripped from its mouth.

Around 70 Minutes Later..

Crickets Crow eyes slowly waved upwards, using it's wings for support as it lifted its upper bird body. The small black crow glew, before erupting and turning into the sweating human Cricket. Lowering his head while slouching as his legs were just laying upon the ground behind him. Coughing heavily as he spewed some disgusting transparent water out of his mouth.. Eeeww. Monster Saliva, that thing drooled in his mouth.. Gross. Cricket quickly spat the rest and out and ran his hand over his tongue. Looking to the side as he spotted the Crystal Crow, crawling towards him as he ruffled the birds feathers. The crow's eyes withered upwards staring at Cricket weakly, it glowed, before turning into the winged Crystal. The eyes withered downwards, plummeting to the ground again, slamming his back against the ground. Cricket quickly lifted up Crystal's back and supported his head. Slapping him slightly before using his hand to support Crystal's neck again.
Asoleado gave a small moan, glancing around as it saw Cricket and Crystal. Dragging it's body along the ground and nuzzling Crystal's cheek lightly.
"Garro?"
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 6:47 am

"Darn I can't see...I told ya this place was haunted" Derrick moaned as he felt the cold moist rocky walls and soon feeling Athena's cold tail, "There are snakes down here?" he asked oddly.

"That's my tail you dimwitt!" Athena growled before looking around the place. "It is dark but I can see perfectly, you haven't been eating enough veggies you idiot!" the dragon said before slapping him with her tail, with that Derrick growled back.
"I feel something... is that you Derrick?" Michi soon asked feeling Crystal's arm then his wings. "Can't be..."
"Open your eyes, your a herbivore...you should be able to see" the winter dragon said and looked at her true rider.
"Oh yea..." Michi half chcukled then opened her eyes to see Crystal, quickly jumping back. "Woah who the heck are you?" she asked before sosmething grabbed at her neck and back. It was a 7 year old girl dressed in a cat suit, the girl jumped to her back and shouted out,"I Cat!"
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 6:53 am

Crystal's eyes withered open, suddenly, still in shock from the whip, like most birds would do. Crystal flew into the air, screeching loudly while tossing himself into the walls while continuing to let out heavy screeches. Cricket covered his head as rubble tumbled upon it, "Crystal! Calm Down!" Cricket whimpered as a rock tumbled down. Rolling upon the ground to dodge it, Crystal's yellow eyes turned light violet again. Panting slightly as he glanced around his setting, "Where.. Where are we?" He asked everyone, swinging himself around in the air. Asoleado grinned in pleasure, knowing that he was Okay now. His bright eyes glanced around to spot another dragon.
"Rooo?"
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:08 am

"Let's just get out and bird boy, stop screaming!" Athena growled then looked to Derrick who acted as if he was complety blind, he felt the walls helplessly not knowing where to walk. "Isn't Crystal a girl's name?" Derrick chuckled to himself, he had heard Cricket screaing out his name.

Michi opened her eyes watching Crystal fly around, continuelessly hitting the top of the cave. "Calm down! Or you will kill us all!" she shouted trying to dodge the falling rocks and rubble. But soon she heard flapping, looking up she saw vampire bats...they soon fell towards the group in a swarm while biting at the creatures.

Ooc: Lol lets have lots of meat eating creatures in the caves... more excitting!
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:17 am

"Shut Up Dog breath!" Hissed Crystal, glancing as the bats flew towards the ground attacked Cricket, his dragon and the twerps. Cricket removed his sword from it's covering, swinging it around in the air as the sword of 'Shamballa' glowed intensely. Causing light to erupt into the cave as the legendary sword was swung around, chopping off the wings of some of the bats as they tumbled to the ground and began to flail helplessly. Crystal flew downwards, towards the twerps, his dragon and Cricket, he threw his head up and screeched. His wings bashing forwards, wing being thrown forwards as most of the bats splattled against the wall. Asoleado growled, trying to swipe the remaining bats with his tail.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:30 am

Michi crossed her arms madly while slitting her eyes, not out going enough or brave to say anything in reply.
"Stop acting like a girl" Derrick hissed at her, she soon gave him an angry look with her red eyes. "Oh yea... I forgot" he said to himself, glad that he could now see in the light. Athena bit her fangs into the last bat and teared it to shreds hungrily, "Ew..." Derrick commented before looking to the exist of the 'room' they were in. It had been sealed with a large boulder like rock, he put his hand on his head and scratched it. "Well that could be a problem..." he thought out loud.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:42 am

"If we all push at the same time it might delatch itself from the wall." Suggested Cricket, darting towards the boulder and stabbing his sword into it. Using his hands by forcing the sword in, and his body to push against the rock. Crystal nodded, flew backwards and swooping, slamming his body into the rock as feathers flew everywhere. He darted backwards again, swooping down and throwing himself against the large rock. Feathers once again flew everywhere.
Asoleado slowly pawed the ground, before charging forwards and slamming his body into the rock. Hearing it move slightly, the three continued their attempts. Hoping the others would join in.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 8:01 am

Michi nodded and soon helped pushing while Derrick chuckled standing still. Michi growled, her eyes blood red for it was night...she now pushed the boulder with an abnormal strength and it moved fasted. "Geesh! your all doing it the hard way..." Athena said before rubbing her icy cold tail on the surface of the boulder's floor so that it would be nice and slippery. Derrick soon started pulling the boulder towards him while the rest pushed and Athena did nothing...
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:06 am

"I have a better Idea!" Cricket mumbled, the sword that was stuck in the rocks surface glowed intensely. Asoleado slowly backed away, using his tail to move Michi and Derrick away as well. As the Shamballa sword glowed, the restrained rock cracked, the cracks spreading across the entire rock. Cricket swiftly removed the sword as the rock withered, then stayed the same. "Crystal.."
Crystal nodded, throwing his head upwards while screeching. His body glowing and intense white purple, the angel flew towards the rocks, in a blur, the object then slammed itself into the rock. The rock crumbled beneath the power, leaving the entrance empty. Crystal withered to the ground, slamming his bum against the ground while slouching forwards, pointing. "Done." Crystal mumbled.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:40 am

"Show off" Derrick soon spat and walked past the entrance calmly and plainly. Michi's eyes soon became blue again as it soon became midnight. "Stop complaining it isn't like you could of done that..." Athena hissed to Derrick, whacking him on the shoulder as the continued walking. Derrick rubbed his shoulder and cursed as he walked. Michi soon pulled of the girl on her back, "is she yours?" she asked to the other three. Cat soon leapt off from Michi and cnow clinged too Cricket's right arm.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:54 am

"I don't think so--Hey!" Cricket shouted, as the girl clung herself to his leg, he shook it rapidly, "Let go you little vermin!"
"I think you have a fan." Crystal weakly chuckled, stumbling to his feet and giving an Icy glare with his violet eyes, "I don't see you with wings. Do you?" His wings suddenly widened to their normal size, over six feet long. The feather withered slightly as the light dyed down. Crystal peered at Asoleado, mentioning him to move. The sun dragon nodded, slowly moving past the exit of the tunnel, Cricket nodded, holding the sword high into the air again. Light burst from it, light now bouncing off the walls so they could see.
Cricket dragged himself and Cat along, mumbling some words into Crystal; "Do they know who we are?"
"I don't think so.." Replied Crystal, beating his wings together to dart past the exit, fluttering above Derrick and the others. Cricket gave an stern look at Cat, holding his sword up high as he dragged himself along.
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:05 am

"WAH! STOP SHAKING ME!" Cat cried while she was shaked but soon stopped her crying once Cricket stopped shaking her. She smiled as she was dragged along with his leg, Michi sighed and continued walking normally. "What happens if IT comes back?" she asked anyone not worrying who answered the question.
"It won't..." Derrick said and continued, not like the fact that the monster destroyed his one and only weapon, "It just can't..."
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PostSubject: Re: In the monster's lair (Shunned+Cold)   Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:13 am

"Not to be the bringer of bad news, but I think it was planning of eating us for dinner." Suggested Crystal, fluttering above the small group as Cricket continued to drag the small body along the ground. "Get off.." He mumbled under his breath, followed by some cursing. Cricket continued to drag the happy and tear-filled body along the ground, still holding the sword high into the air as it's light erupted against the walls. Asoleado continued to rear his head forwards and backwards, his tail flickering around. Crystal slowly twirled in the air, his wings fluttering above his back as he used his bird-like vision to peer into the darkness.
"Clear."
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